Introduce big details of the setting of a scene first, then weave smaller details throughout. Your reader shouldn’t learn that it’s nighttime halfway through the second page, suddenly plunging their visualization into the dark.
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Introduce big details of the setting of a scene first, then weave smaller details throughout. Your reader shouldn’t learn that it’s nighttime halfway through the second page, suddenly plunging their visualization into the dark.